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Issues of the Heart by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 404]
Summary:

DONE!!!!!

This is in response to KrazyKat2009's Issues of the Heart challenge:

Summary: [AU]. Jim Kirk never joined StarFleet. He moved to California to escape his home in which his mother ignored him and his stepfather used him as a scapegoat for his frustration. Instead of becoming a notorious womanizer, Jim has chosen to lead a quiet life of solitude, living in an apartment complex, fixing people's computers and appliances for money. He keeps to himself, unless required to be around others in which he is unfailingly polite and respectful... but he uses his charm as a wall to keep people from getting to close to him. All of that changes when Jim goes to a StarFleet academic event to accompany a friend who goes to school there (not McCoy- who Jim can be introduced to later at author's discretion). Jim happens upon Spock, and cannot help himself from striking up a conversation after having read some of Spock's research in journals. Spock becomes intrigued of the intelligent young man, and wants to know more about him... but getting through Jim's barriers may prove to be quite difficult... K/S romance. No sex needed, but preferred. Would like emphasis on the evolution of their emotional/romantic relationship. BONUS POINTS: Please, PLEASE would like for Jim to be inexperienced in being intimate sexually with anyone (has issues with getting close to anyone enough for sex due to childhood neglect), but nonetheless is becoming intensely attracted to Spock. MEGA BONUS POINTS: Spock becomes patient, but determined, to win Jim's affections... and eventually leads to a lot of affectionate touching, comforting "snuggling", and maybe even some fondling. RULES? Have FUN.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, McCoy, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Issues of the Heart
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70946 Read Count: 609630
[Report This] Published: 04/21/2011 Updated: 05/13/2011
Reviewer: Tsu Signed
Date: 04/21/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Handyman

Cette review juste pour vous dire, CMM, combien j'aime votre travail. J'ai lu toutes vos fictions et je ne m'en lasse pas. Cette dernière fiction postée s'annonce aussi bonne que les autres et je suis déjà fébrille à l'idée de lire la suite. Surtout ne vous arrêter pas!

This review just for say how I like your work, CMM. I've read all your fiction and I can not get enought. This last fiction posted looks as good as the other and I am already excited by the idea of read more. Don't stop write please! (I'm french so sorry for the faults)

Tsu



Author's Response:

Pas de problem. Je suis Americane, mais je parle francais un petit peu. Merci pour votre review.

 

Thank you. :)

 

Clan, Family, and T'hy'la by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

DONE!!!!!

This is in answer to Shamrock220's A Place in Father's Arms challenge. It is a really long challenge, so I am going to summarize it. Feel free to go to the challenges page and look up the whole thing if you wish. Briefly, it goes like this:

it's set post-Nero, but Amanda survived. Jim and Spock are a couple. Sarek won't let them bond and threatens to bounce Spock right out of the Vulcan club. Spock tells him to get bent, and they appear before the High Council to do a little family mediation. T'Pau defends Spock and Jim because they are t'hy'la, the most rare and sacred of bonds. Not only does T'Pau allow them to bond, she arranges for Jim and Spock to spend a year at the new colony, with Spock on the High Council. For his sins, Sarek is shunned for one year; no one on Vulcan will interact with him on a social level. He goes off into the mountains on a pilgrimage, to get his head together. Jim doesn't want Spock's father to die, so he plants a transponder on him, hoping to keep him safe. Trouble ensues, but a happy ending will happen.

That's pretty much it. This will take awhile. Off we go...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Gaila, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Place in Father's arms, Spock's Brother
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99607 Read Count: 322929
[Report This] Published: 05/16/2011 Updated: 07/15/2011
Reviewer: Tsu Signed
Date: 05/22/2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Law Is a Two-edged Sword

Génial! Sarek pris à son propre piège, je ne peux pas attendre pour voir ce qu'il va lui arriver! Déclarer le lien T'hy'la est un facile non ?  Je pensais qu'un guérisseur viendrait vérifier la force du lien.

Pour Bones, je ne l'ai jamais vu avec Sybok, ca pourrait être amusant si les deux fils de Sarek étaient liés à un humain ^^

>Awesome! >Sarek took his own trap, I can not wait to see what will happen to him! >Report the link T'hy'la is an easy no? >I thought that a healer would check the strength of the link.

>For Bones, I've never seen him with Sybok, it could be fun if both the son of Sarek were linked to a human ^^

 



Author's Response:

Trés intéressant. Vous être le premier à mentionner Sybok avec Bones. Trés bien.

All right, that's all the French I can dredge up. But the idea of Sybok and Bones is a very fascinating one. Merci.

Hesitation by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 455]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE!

This is in response to Tydomin's The King's Speech challenge:

I'd love to read an AU based (loosely!) on The King's Speech (what a wonderful film...)!

It should be set in a universe where non-reform Vulcan is the ruling planet in an empire, and the Emperor is Sarek.  Sybok is part of the family, and has just taken the throne of Vulcan (replacing an aunt or uncle, I guess). However, he is an Edward VIII type figure and will give up the throne to Spock, who is the only other heir.

But, problem - Spock is a reject from the family (due to his human heritage and his speech impediment, which is unheard of among full-blood vulcans) and has lived a lonely and anonymous life on Earth for many years. During that time, Kirk has fallen in love with him from a distance, and they are tentatively beginning a relationship.  Kirk, of course, does not know who Spock really is.

Eventually, Sybok abdicates and Spock receives the summons. How will the couple cope with the revelation? Will Spock overcome the obstacles in his path? Will a common human be acceptable as consort to the King? Spock has already been going to speech therapy just so he can say 'I love you' to Kirk, but of course it turns out that he will need the skills for a much farther reaching cause.

I want a story with a happy ending, and preferably using the TOS characters.  I don't mind what career Kirk has  - you decide.  Whether or not Amanda is in it is up to you, but if she is, I would think she would be a servant or something rather than the Empress. Extra points if you can make Doctor McCoy a convincing speech therapist!

 

And away we go.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Stonn, T'Pring
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: The King's Speech K/S style
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114779 Read Count: 357022
[Report This] Published: 06/02/2011 Updated: 11/08/2011
Reviewer: Tsu Signed
Date: 06/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Vulcan Federation of Planets

Autant j'adore Sybok en temps normal autant je le déteste dans ta fiction! Comment peut-il faire ça à son propre frère ? Heureusement que Jim est là pour aider Spock. J'arrive pas à croire qu'ils vont se lier si vite ! Mais Spock est si mignon dans son besoin de Jim.

Il like so much Sybock in the ordinary time but in this fic I hate him! How can he do that to his own brother! Fortunately Jim is here to help Spock. I can't believe that they will bond so fast! But Spock is so cute in his need for Jim.



Author's Response:

Yes, Sybok is a miserable, rotten person. But Jim will help Spock through. Merci.

My Logic Is Sound by synia Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Five times Spock justified an illogical act and one time he didn't even bother.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1683 Read Count: 6819
[Report This] Published: 06/08/2011 Updated: 06/08/2011
Reviewer: Tsu Signed
Date: 06/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Logic Is Sound

Ahh so cute!Il like this fic, and "It is logical to protect the one I love." !! The best declaration of love I ever seen !!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked Spock's declaration! ^_^

An Unexpected Journey by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
Summary:

Now done!

This is in response to Kittygirl's Jim the Single Parent challenge:

This idea has been floating around in my brain for a while so I figured I'd issue a challenge to see what people came up with. This does have the potential to be rather long.

It goes like this:

While Spock is still with Uhura, he ends up having a drunken fling with Kirk, who is completely in love with him. Kirk somehow ends up pregnant with his child(it doesn't matter how you make this come about, either meddling aliens or an auxiliary uterus idea that keeps floating around or that Jim just can). When Spock is finally informed of the conception he decides that, since he and Uhura cannot have children together for whatever reason (completely your idea why), Jim's child be the perfect candidate instead and decides to take the child and whisk it away New Vulcan after it is born to raise it with Uhura. He believes Jim to illogical and reckless to raise a child. Enlisting McCoy's help, who thinks that its better for the child to be raised by Vulcan's, the trio keep a close eye on Jim in case he gets wind of the plan. When Jim realizes what Spock is planning, he puts in his resignation in Starfleet and leaves for parts unknown. Some years pass (more than 2 less than 7) and Jim returns as a personal favor to Chris Pike to command the Enterprise again with a little surprise in tow. Now Spock has to deal with a child that does not like him for the pain he caused its Mother(the kid has to call Jim mom)and the complete distrust of Jim with his child.

 

You may use any name you wish for the child, boy or girl. How Jim finds out the plot is entirely up to you. Uhura could tell him in a fit of anger at him, or he could overhear them talking or McCoy tells him in a fit of Conscience.

I would like it in the Abrams Universe, because I think a mixture of Jim and Spock would look so cute with Blue eyes. However this does come with a few stipulations.

1. Under no circumstances does Jim have any communication with the trio of evildoers until he returns to the Enterprise(I've always wanted to use that word). In his mind Bones, Spock, and Uhura betrayed him. Anyone else is completely welcome.

2. Sarek is the doting Grandpa... He can know he has a grandchild and is kept updated on the child's growth. I think it would be an awesome way to re-introduce Jim back to the Enterprise by having him and child picked up from Sarek's home...

And 3...

HAS TO HAVE HAPPY ENDING!

Since two of my other long pieces are coming pretty close to the end, I decided it was time to reclaim my crown as queen of mpreg.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Jim the Single Parent
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65809 Read Count: 519308
[Report This] Published: 01/19/2012 Updated: 02/24/2012
Reviewer: Tsu Signed
Date: 02/15/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Four Years after the Flight

A love yours stories and 'an expected journey' even more! Spock will have to fight to gain the trust of Jim, I want to see how! In opposite of many people, I like Trelane, I have the impression that his intention is to show to Spock that Jim is the love of his life in a strange way... after all, Spock was to marry Nyota in the begining, perhaps Trelane doesn't like this fact. Anyway, I'm eager to read more...

Tsu (Sorry for the fault, English is not my first language)



Author's Response:

You did very well, and you are right about Trelane. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)