Penname: Nocturnal Nightengale [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 10/09/2011
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I recently discovered the Star Trek fandom after seeing the Reboot movie. Unfortunately, I did not discover the original series sooner, and am in the process of watching it now! Love this fandom and looking forward reading more stories and hopefully writing one one day^^


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An Unexpected Journey by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
Summary:

Now done!

This is in response to Kittygirl's Jim the Single Parent challenge:

This idea has been floating around in my brain for a while so I figured I'd issue a challenge to see what people came up with. This does have the potential to be rather long.

It goes like this:

While Spock is still with Uhura, he ends up having a drunken fling with Kirk, who is completely in love with him. Kirk somehow ends up pregnant with his child(it doesn't matter how you make this come about, either meddling aliens or an auxiliary uterus idea that keeps floating around or that Jim just can). When Spock is finally informed of the conception he decides that, since he and Uhura cannot have children together for whatever reason (completely your idea why), Jim's child be the perfect candidate instead and decides to take the child and whisk it away New Vulcan after it is born to raise it with Uhura. He believes Jim to illogical and reckless to raise a child. Enlisting McCoy's help, who thinks that its better for the child to be raised by Vulcan's, the trio keep a close eye on Jim in case he gets wind of the plan. When Jim realizes what Spock is planning, he puts in his resignation in Starfleet and leaves for parts unknown. Some years pass (more than 2 less than 7) and Jim returns as a personal favor to Chris Pike to command the Enterprise again with a little surprise in tow. Now Spock has to deal with a child that does not like him for the pain he caused its Mother(the kid has to call Jim mom)and the complete distrust of Jim with his child.

 

You may use any name you wish for the child, boy or girl. How Jim finds out the plot is entirely up to you. Uhura could tell him in a fit of anger at him, or he could overhear them talking or McCoy tells him in a fit of Conscience.

I would like it in the Abrams Universe, because I think a mixture of Jim and Spock would look so cute with Blue eyes. However this does come with a few stipulations.

1. Under no circumstances does Jim have any communication with the trio of evildoers until he returns to the Enterprise(I've always wanted to use that word). In his mind Bones, Spock, and Uhura betrayed him. Anyone else is completely welcome.

2. Sarek is the doting Grandpa... He can know he has a grandchild and is kept updated on the child's growth. I think it would be an awesome way to re-introduce Jim back to the Enterprise by having him and child picked up from Sarek's home...

And 3...

HAS TO HAVE HAPPY ENDING!

Since two of my other long pieces are coming pretty close to the end, I decided it was time to reclaim my crown as queen of mpreg.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Jim the Single Parent
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65809 Read Count: 519348
[Report This] Published: 01/19/2012 Updated: 02/24/2012
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Date: 03/03/2012 Title: Chapter 10: A Wedding, a Birthday, and a Gift

lol that is priceless, T'Pring oh man wait till Spock hears that, if he ever gets too.

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 11: Memories and Dreams

oh my gosh, my heart broke for Jim for his conversation with Mimi, you're terrible for making us all cry. I think Spock has learned his lesson, I think it's about time he's given a chance to make up for his mistakes.

Author's Response:

He'll get a chance. I promise.

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 12: Four Years and Two Weeks after the Flight

talk about a close call, I'm glad Spock is sticking around.

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 13: A Cross between a Class Reunion and a Coronation

aww, such a sweet moment^^ Can't wait for these two work things out between them^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 14: Vulcans Are not Structural Engineers

awww, that was perfect^^ lol Spock the Cat Finder!

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 15: Matchmakers and Meddlers

O.O I hope Trelane doesn't cause any trouble. Sweet scene with Jim and Spock, sigh^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 16: A Birthday--and a Bad Decision

WTF is with Spock, but I got a feeling I know what it is...lol, time for Jim to the rescue^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 17: Honeymoon at Gol

HOT DAMN! Lol that was great^^ So glad they are together^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 18: Vulcans Don't Have Flower Girls

AWWWW!!! that was perfect with Mimi giving the blessing^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Choice

OH MY GOSH!!! talk about a twist, you are bloody fantastic! running to next chapter!!!!

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Terrible Gamble

My heart broke for Spock and Mimi, but I understood his decision, well there is hope. Mimi has such a strong connection with Jim, your talent in writing is amazing^^

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Only Logical Decision

Time for Mimi to rescue her Ko-mekh^^ I know you do happy endings so I'm not too worried!

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Journey

LOL! So great of T'Pau to state the obvious! you know I thought of all the children you have created in all the stories, I think they are all great^^ lol they should all meet and compare notes^^lol So glad Jim is awake!

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Date: 03/04/2012 Title: Chapter 23: A Safe Harbor

This is so great! So looking forward to the the Sequel, I never liked the borg, ewgh they are so creepy (shudders. I'm weary of Trelane too, so Thank you for an amazing read. I'm gonna run to off to read the updates for Finding Thy'la. As always amazing work!!!

Equal Opportunity Too by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A fan was complaining to me about too many WIPS on this site and not enough stand-alone stories. So, in my quest to make EVERYONE happy, I offer the sequel to my earlier piece, Equal Opportunity.

Jim won Spock from T'Pring, but....


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Scott
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5810 Read Count: 11654
[Report This] Published: 01/21/2012 Updated: 01/21/2012
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Date: 01/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I adored this....it was just plain beautiful. You write amazing and I love what ever you write short/long etc. Amazing work!!!! and looking forward to more^^

Sundered by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Now done!

 

As Meryl Streep said at the Oscars, someone is probably looking at this and saying, "Oh, God. Not HER again!"

This is in answer to Juni's A Bond That Went Astray challenge:

Summary:

Jim and Spock are newly bonded with the T’hy’la bond – the strongest and most unique of them, but this time the bond instead of helping, being an anchor, guiding light etc, is actually the main source of the problem for the two.

During the away mission the away team is attacked by separatists and Spock is injured. Kirk must leave him behind in order to secure the ship, save the crew etc, and Spock himself urges him to leave (the needs of the many…). With a heavy heart Jim leaves. Spock is captured and viciously tortured and abused. During that time the bond calls to Jim but it cannot reach its other end. After a week or so Spock is saved and he is on his way to recovery, remorseful Kirk doting on him and offering him every comfort. But there is a certain uneasiness between them. It starts slow – Spock not confiding in Jim about his problems, not wanting to have sex, later not even wanting to sleep in the same bed. It’s getting worse – Spock cannot meditate, cannot rest, eat, concentrate – he succumbs to some unknown illness. In the end it turns out the bond is responsible for everything. The T’hy’la bond has actually a certain doze of consciousness and when Kirk abandoned Spock and did not rescue him when the Vulcan suffered, it “decided” that Jim betrayed the bond and should not be allowed to be near Spock again. So it started to influence Spock’s mind in order to permanently separate him from Kirk. The thing is that the bond’s actions are killing the Vulcan in the process and a solution must be found soon in order to prevent it.

Bonus points:

The bond despite being part of Spock is not affected by his Vulcan (logic) and human (trust, faith) sides, so despite the fact that Spock knew that Jim had to leave and he was going to come back for him, the bond saw it as abandoning a chosen mate.

Spock Prime has no idea what is happening and cannot help. He tries to prepare Jim for the possibility that young Spock may die and I will love you forever if Jim actually has a real breakdown in his arms :)

McCoy being the one to sort out that it’s the bond thing and somehow participating in curing Spock

Lots of angst in this one, but a happy ending as usual.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A bond that went astray
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29918 Read Count: 42630
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2012 Updated: 03/31/2012
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Date: 04/01/2012 Title: Chapter 10: The End and the Beginning

I waited until the story was finished before I read it, and boy It was fabulous and well worth the wait^^. I had to force my self not to click every time a chapter a posted cause lets face it I have the patience of a kumquat. Or as one of my favorite quotes goes "Patience is a virtue, just not one of mine" lol So as always this is an amazing story and I look forward to whatever else you may write.

Author's Response:

As Spock would say, "how can a kumquat, being a non-sentient life form, havwe any patience at all?"

Actuaally, this was a good story to wait for, since it was 'only' ten chapters, lol. Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

This is in response to Rihala's Balance of Terror and Love Challenge. It goes like this::

ST: XI Abrams fic based on the TOS episode "Balance of Terror."

Spock is no stranger to being the unwilling subject of racism and xenophobia because of his childhood on Vulcan. So when a fellow crewmember begins flaunting his bigotry in increasingly violent encounters with the Commander, Spock intends to follow Starfleet protocol an resolve the conflict as professionally and quietly as possible. However, when he contacts the head of security, he finds that Chief Giotto shares the same xenphobic tendencies he trying to dissipate.

More details regarding the challenge can be found here: http://www.ksarchive.com/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=216


Okay, so I hope this fits the bill. My first attempt at a multi-chaptered fic with an actual plot in YEARS! Please review, I love to hear what people think, it's very helpful when you're trying to improve your skills to hear feedback about what you're doing right or wrong. Thanks!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Challenges: Balance of Terror and Love
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45550 Read Count: 73368
[Report This] Published: 03/05/2012 Updated: 03/22/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: The First Incident

omg I can't believe I didn't read this story before now...

Poor Spock thinking Jim won't accept him, and the end that was just nasty--the message to Spock.

running to next chapter!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Oh my, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to review. Thank you for taking time to read. I'm glad you enjoyed. :) (a year later, LOL)

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Spock's "Logic"

yea that was one creepy rant at the end!

going to next chapter!!!

did I mentioned you have me hooked? lol I was planning on going to bed, now I need to finish this..lol

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Second Incident

aww I love Jim's confession at the end^^ I hope Spock heard it^^



Author's Response:

So, I love that you're enjoying the story and I'm sorry it's got you sucked in so late at night, but I definitely can relate. I just wanted to write you a response before I drink too much Boone's Farm to tell you thanks for putting this one over 100 on the review scale. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and still get a good night's rest despite your late read.

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Revelations, Confessions and First Kisses

aww yay finally^^