Penname: Nocturnal Nightengale [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 10/09/2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I recently discovered the Star Trek fandom after seeing the Reboot movie. Unfortunately, I did not discover the original series sooner, and am in the process of watching it now! Love this fandom and looking forward reading more stories and hopefully writing one one day^^


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Summary:

This is in response to Rihala's Balance of Terror and Love Challenge. It goes like this::

ST: XI Abrams fic based on the TOS episode "Balance of Terror."

Spock is no stranger to being the unwilling subject of racism and xenophobia because of his childhood on Vulcan. So when a fellow crewmember begins flaunting his bigotry in increasingly violent encounters with the Commander, Spock intends to follow Starfleet protocol an resolve the conflict as professionally and quietly as possible. However, when he contacts the head of security, he finds that Chief Giotto shares the same xenphobic tendencies he trying to dissipate.

More details regarding the challenge can be found here: http://www.ksarchive.com/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=216


Okay, so I hope this fits the bill. My first attempt at a multi-chaptered fic with an actual plot in YEARS! Please review, I love to hear what people think, it's very helpful when you're trying to improve your skills to hear feedback about what you're doing right or wrong. Thanks!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Challenges: Balance of Terror and Love
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45550 Read Count: 73368
[Report This] Published: 03/05/2012 Updated: 03/22/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 5: A Lovers Interlude

Very Hot and very endering I loved it^^

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid

Komack, what an asshole!

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Prime Suspect

O.o srsly you know how to write, you have me on the edge of my seat reading this story..lol

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 8: Plotting the Trap

awww I love that Jim talks and Spock hears him.

running to next chapter!!!

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 9: The First Step Is Admitting You Have a Problem

Spock would try to talk sense, its so him^^

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Home and Finding New Hope

That was hot between Jim and Spock, and I like ending you gave Matthews. lol him and Stonn, lol.

This has been a great read^^ as always great work, I love your writing style^^



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed. :)

Summary:

This is a response to KingSirahk's challenge:

Summary: Spock loses his memory. Remembers practically nothing of his life. He is immediately attracted to Kirk, who has been doing his best to keep his attraction to Spock a secret, so when Spock is coming on to him its a bit of a shock and does his best not to take advantage of the situation. Keep in mind: Spock will slowly regain control of himself as time passes and as his memory returns. But as he doesn't have his Vulcan control when he 'first' meets Kirk, he just falls in love (again) with Kirk since they are T'hy'la (but Spock of course at the time, doesn't know this, he just falls in love at first sight) This must be a happy story, you can add angst/drama/whatever to keep the story line going, but over all it must have a happy ending. This is can be what ever rating the author chooses and how long. Would prefer to be in Abrams Universe, madame and/or sir. Thank you, and have fun! :D
Categories: Fiction Characters: McCoy

 

 

I can't seem to stop...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Happy Memory Loss
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27936 Read Count: 50552
[Report This] Published: 03/24/2012 Updated: 04/11/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOH this is so promising, I am looking forward to more....jumping to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Wonderful. :)

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/29/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Go Spock!!! lol poor Jim, Can't wait for the next chapter!!! This is so great, lol I feel so giddy after reading this...I think Spock is starting to rub off...lol

Author's Response:

Yes, poor Jim. It's okay, he'll get by. lol ;)

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was great when Jim figured out he got played and my heart broke for Spock that the first memory he got back was of his mother's death. This is truly great!!!! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter and how they get together^^

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. ;)

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Date: 04/02/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

omg omg!!!! You have got be be kidding me, leaving us here!!!! Please update soon, I'm biting my nails in anticipation...lol great chapter!!!! So looking forward to the next^^

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It sucks to be sick, so I will wait patiently, please get better soon^^

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. ;) I'm feeling better today, so I'm going to try and at least work on it. If I don't get it done by this afternoon, then by tomorrow, I should think...

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Date: 04/03/2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOOT!!! That was so great!!! Thank you for a great chapter and I hope you and your daughter are well. I saw this earlier this morning and I squealed on top of jumping up and down...So of course I have to share it! I 'm not sure if you had a chance to see it yet...So here you go...

http://www.mania.com/first-star-trek-sequel-set-photos_article_132253.html

I think you'll be pleasantly surprised^^

Author's Response:

Yes, I have seen them. Squee. :D

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

THAT WAS SO HOT!!!! srsly, I need cold shower, it was beautiful as it was hot. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I'm sad to see this end but it's been great^^ I'm looking forward to what ever else you write^^

Author's Response:

Thank you. I don't think this one needs to be drawn out. Happy warm fuzzies for all.

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Date: 04/11/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was fabulous!!! I really like your writing style, and I hope to read more from you.^^

P.S. the story still says "works in progress" I think you can change it to complete now.

Author's Response:

I totally did change the status. I will have to go see why it didn't update...

Thank you for pointing it out and for your kind words. ;) You likely won't have to wait for long. I have an idea for Fuck Olympics, that I've been kicking around for a while.

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

However, if it's you are not done I have no complains...feel free to add another chapter^^ lol

Summary:

This is the first in a series of one-shots all taking place in the same universe. I decided that this archive needs a new intergalactic porn saga, so this is the beginning of that saga. I am, in fact, taking prompts.

Check out the link to the series to learn more about what it's all about. Don't forget to leave feedback. And incase you can't already tell, it's not too heavy on plot, but they will each contain a morsel of background story.

 

A/N 5-20-12: I just noticed that this fits the Wall Sex challenge and have submitted it for that. Who'd have thunk it? Too bad I didn't mention the green tunic wrap, could have had a two-for. That's okay, this series isn't over and I'm sure I can find more opportunities for wall sex, specifically of the green tunic variety.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Wall Sex
Series: The Intergalactic Fuck Olympics (Take THAT, CMM)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1364 Read Count: 6133
[Report This] Published: 03/24/2012 Updated: 03/24/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this, it's great!!!! and since you're taking suggestions. I have this scene where they are at some negotiations event and someone is flirting/pursuing Kirk. Spock obviously notices and gets possessive/territorial, so of course he takes Jim in the out-side garden or something. I love a hot possessive Spock.

So looking forward to what else you write^^

Author's Response:

I like this suggestion very much. I'm working on piecing something together for posting on Saturday. It might not be this request, but I'm definitely going to do one for this prompt. Definitely. And soon.

A Lesson in Self-Control by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

As happens occasionally, none of my long stories are cooperating (I don't write them; they write themselves while I type). So, as I usually do, I produced something with no socially redeeming value.

Jim hates conference calls with Admiral Komack. Spock's going to help him.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1916 Read Count: 9063
[Report This] Published: 03/30/2012 Updated: 03/30/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ROFL!!!! This is priceless....lol Glad to see Spock bring out Jim's better qualities^^

Summary:

This is for Wingstar--a huge fan of K/S and apparently Sarek/Bones. This is number two in the Intergalactic Fuck Olympics Series.

In this week's episode, the Enterprise hosts Ambassador Sarek as he has volunteered to negotiate a peace treaty between two factions of a world at war...but the real story here is Jim and Spock's inability to keep things in the bedroom and the effect it has on an unsuspecting father and a knowing, but wishing he didn't, doctor.

I hope you will all read and find this work as socially unredeeming as it meant to be, but still highly entertaining and thoroughly arousing, as good porn should be.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, First Time, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: The Intergalactic Fuck Olympics (Take THAT, CMM)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4959 Read Count: 9128
[Report This] Published: 04/01/2012 Updated: 04/01/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fabulous!!! I think they should Jim and Spock should make Bones a squirm a little at this awkward family dinner...lol Sarek can come to the rescue. Looking forward to all your installments in this series^^

Author's Response:

Lol. I could see me writing a follow up at some point in the series.

When Tides Converge by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

This is the story that several people (yes, Wingstar, I'm talking to you) have been nagging me to finish. It is sort of a sequel to The Courtship of Spock's Father, but I explain enough in this story that you don't have to read that one first.

The premise is simple. Have you ever worked in an office where all the women's...um...cycles start cycling together? Well.....


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Daddy Sarek, Bond Mate Bones, and Kitlings
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7162 Read Count: 7958
[Report This] Published: 04/03/2012 Updated: 04/03/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ROFL!!!
“Spock.”


“Yes, father?” Spock turned.


“You will pay to have that rug cleaned,” Sarek said gently.


And so Spock did.

That was just awesome at the end. This was so hot!!! Absolutely fabulous!!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought that was the perfect ending, quite logical.

Coordination in Tight Spaces by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Number three in the Intergalactic Fuck Olympics Series.

In this week's episode, Jim and Spock are headed to Indiana for Shoreleave. Takes place a few weeks after number one in the series. Also answers the challenge: Shoreleave by Unicorn.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Shore leave
Series: The Intergalactic Fuck Olympics (Take THAT, CMM)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3133 Read Count: 4441
[Report This] Published: 04/09/2012 Updated: 04/09/2012
Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's great plot!!! I loved Jim's declaration^^ Lol, talk about contortionist act, I was thinking they might doing it in the back of the car, but the trunk srsly that's creative^^ Looking forward to more^^

Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you. I'm glad you liked the plot and, I had given thought to them ending up in the back seat or something, but the trunk just...I mean a) It's hilarious and b) I really like the idea of tight-space lovin', lol.. Trunk is perfect for that...